Lesson 11 · Everything at once

Integration

Tasks that need reading, reformulation, register and attribution together.

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Nothing new is taught here. What is new is that each task needs two or three of the phase’s skills at the same time, which is how they occur outside a lesson: you unpack a dense sentence in order to summarise it, and you choose a hedge because of who will read the summary.

Work in that order: understand, then decide the register, then write. Choosing the wording before you have understood the claim is what produces confident summaries of things the source never said.

TaskSkills it needs
Dense sentence → plain proseunpacking + verbal style
Informal note → report sentenceregister + nominal style
Source claim → your textattribution + hedging
Two sources → one sentencesynthesis + connectives
Officialese → instruction someone can followverbal style + audience
Spoken stance → written summarypragmatics + neutral paraphrase
  • Die im Frühjahr vorgelegte Untersuchung nennt im Mittel 59 Monate.

    The study submitted in spring gives an average of 59 months.

    dense source sentence

  • Der Untersuchung zufolge dauern die Verfahren im Mittel 59 Monate.

    According to the study, the procedures take 59 months on average.

    unpacked and attributed — one move for comprehension, one for distance

Die Verfahren dauern 59 Monate.Der Untersuchung zufolge dauern die Verfahren im Mittel 59 Monate.

Two things were dropped: the source and the word im Mittel. Either one alone turns a finding into a fact.

Words from this topic

  • die die Stellungnahmethe statement, the formal comment
  • der der Vorbehaltthe reservation, the caveat
  • die die Tragweitethe significance, the implications
  • abwägento weigh up
  • nachvollziehento follow, to understand someone’s reasoning
  • zuspitzento sharpen, to overstate for effect
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